fmp animatic draft #1

Here's the first draft of the animatic for my fmp. I'm already in the midst of changing shots and shifting things around to make it work better, but I thought it'd be good to post the original so that comparisons can be made.

At this point there is only sound in the memory and end sequences, and the item which she finds is a placeholder, yet to be replaced by something that looks less like a rich tea biscuit.

animatic_fmp_draft_1 from Philip Askins on Vimeo.

*I've just noticed that the video goes a little mad at the end and decides to go back in time, which I blame whole-heartedly on Vimeo...